Finished Edit

I finished editing Broken Agreement, Book III in the Broken series.

I created the cover and wrote a blurb and formatted for Smashwords.

What do you think?

Broken Agreement is the III Science Fiction Novel in the Broken Series (78K words)

Psychic, Casi of Mannuholm, reluctantly agrees to travel to the nearby colony of Boreas II to negotiate the wording of the agreement for the resettlement of the Mannuholm humans.

Vice President of New Thalia, John Clark, is asked to solve the mystery of new settler deaths before the agreement is broken and all continents on Boreas II lose any chance to increase their population to keep the colony viable.

Can John and Casi, with the help of her alien friends, stop the killings and complete the integration of the Mannuholm humans on Boreas II?

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3 comments so far

  1. curiocat on

    Hey, Diane. I’m not feeling the cover. You might want to try something indicating the settlement or two people in conflict. The torn pieces of paper just doesn’t pop.

    I changed the blurb a bit:

    Psychic Casi (last name) reluctantly agrees to oversee the resettlement of the Mannuholm humans on the nearby colony, Boreas II.

    John Clark, Vice President of New Thalia, is asked to discover who is randomly killing new settlers and stop them before the agreement is broken and all continents on Boreas II lose any chance to increase their population to keep the colony viable.

    Can John and Casi, with the help of her alien friends, solve the killings and complete the integration of the Mannuholm humans on Boreas II?

    My question would be what agreement and can that be clarified a bit more? Does Casi have anything to do with the agreement?


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